more to stir a glimpse of life for this forum

[expressionthruskating]

well here is an offering of crappy crapness, written in the 5 minutes before my first englihs exam today,

i figured a random rant would be the best tihng to get this particular place moving again...

perhaps not

anyway enjoy:

Reaching out was the only thing you did wrong.
Touching frayed nerves with glass like perfection
All at once from a single fingertip
A thousand signals, each a singal shiver,
Up,
Down,
Left,
Right,
Through his ice-block sculpture
You had a grasp on those things ge hid
Away,
Locked,
Hidden,
Trapped,
The signals turned to shivers
The shivers turned to jolts,
A violent affection,
You reached out abd touched,
A wreck of nerves
He withdrew
With familiar silence
Perfection froze him, in moments of convulsion,
Tingling,
Shooting up his broken neck,
Knocking on his frosted glass window,
For an hour, a month or so, so
Insistant
Hypnotic
Perfect,
He let you in, with all your glass-like perfection,
You reached out, you touched frayed nerves,
you reached out, he cut off your hand.

[forelander]

If that's crap, i'd hate to see something you deem good.

[bodkinator]

the end kills me. its all so serious until then.
excellent.